Sunday, 9 September 2012

ADDING DETAIL!!!

The huge exhausted Bull Dog barked at a speedy silver car speeding past. The sweaty bull dog had been running all around on its new big farm. 15 minutes later there was a police car speeding trying to chase the speedy silver car from miles and miles. Until the speedy silver car had spun out from turning the steering wheel to hard and the speedy silver car spun out and crashed into the barrier on the side if the road. When the dog saw some smoke a couple meters away the bull dog barked and barked until its owner came out and saw it oh god!!! We have to go and see what’s happened on that street. While the bull dog and its owner were walking they both saw a whole lot of fire all around the car oh god!! Let’s call the fire engine and the ambulance said the owner let’s do it barked the dog. When the fire engine and the ambulance came the bull dog had barked at the car. The people had brag a long wide water hose and sprayed the car so the fire could go out. After that the bulldog dragged the guy that was driving the silver to the police’s car and put him into the police car and the police man driven him to Gail. The bull dog had helped save the day.

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